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Sweet Temptation -A New Eden-

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Published: Oct 15, 2008

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Literature Text

I am that voice that you hear
The soft, gentle whisper
Before you close your eyes
Within  your mind, I grown

I am the voice inside your mind
Driving you toward the edge of insanity
A twisted true or a  perfect lie
Either way you embrace me

Day by day and night after night
Like an heavenly prophecy
Raising from the underworld
I am the twisted voice
Whispering in your ear
And fall for the sweet temptation

Like the absinthe
Promising a new Eden
''Taste the apple mister Adam''
How sweet is it?  Forget about lady Eve

Day by day and night after night
Like an heavenly prophecy
Raising from the underworld
I am the twisted voice
Whispering in your ear
And fall for the sweet temptation

Feel the warmth and become the moth
Dirge of this new kind of Eden
Follow my voice; don't fear lust

I know your mad
Envious and hungry for more
I know your proud
And in your state of despair
Greedy enough to take it all

Listen to my promising lullaby
Take it all, have it all
Sweet temptation of a new Eden

Day by day and night after night
Like an heavenly prophecy
Raising from the underworld
I am the twisted voice
Whispering in your ear
And fall for the sweet temptation

I am not exactly sure of the concept that went through my head while I started to write this text... it was more like the concept of a voice in someone's head driving that person insane... then I came up with the strange concept of the seven deadly sins with Adam and Eve. It's the voice of temptation inside Adam's head, perhaps Lilith, I am not sure... anyway that is what I ended up with in the end. I am slightly satisfied with the result, I hope you enjoy it.

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